Question 4

We found that this feedback that we gained was very useful to us as it gave us confidence that our consistency and theme of the music video and the Ancillary tasks made this a better piece, the criticisms that we gained were pretty much the same through out the feedback so we decided to take action and put some more shots on the shadow of me singing so it broke it down a bit and didn't seem so boring and long winded. The positives from our audience feedback was again pretty much the same it was clear they all liked the flashing of me showing distress we did this so it was more clear that the journey that I was going through was shown throughout and nothing was too misunderstood, they also said that they liked the theme of the red lips and the black smoke this was used so that the connotations of the colours would help the audience understand what I was going through, with the red for blood, passion, anger and love. The black was used for shadows and death connotations foreshadowing what was to come if she stayed in this relationship, I found this affective and clearly it was too when the audience was watching it because they said it themselves. I think that the audience enjoyed watching it and it does suit the target audience being 16-25 women more than males due to the message in the song and the way our artist is portrayed, in to fashion and make-up etc. is more for females but it was easier for us to target those as we knew what we would like to see and based it on that.

Question 3